3 places where I used coordination correctly:
- The liberal arts style of education is one that is more focused on the growth of knowledge for a student and less on the career aspect for their futures.
- Here each student has a major that they are taking a majority of classes in but there is a required curriculum and handbook so that their students still get the liberal arts education, while being career oriented as well.
- STEM, by some liberal arts advocates, is not considered part of the education system of the liberal arts but Sanford Ungar believes that a liberal arts background is going to help students applying in the STEM field.
2 places where I used subordination correctly:
- While students here do have a major, they also are required to take classes that are part of the Core Curriculum to give them a broader perspective and understanding of the materials they are learning.
- While a liberal arts is considered to be solely humanities based, there are also some colleges that include the natural sciences as part of their curriculum.
For the coordination conjunctions I actually found them all in my working draft and I think they all are compound sentences that compare two things, whether it be works from the authors or my ideas. I usually do a pretty good job bringing in compound sentences into my writing so I knew I would have them in my essay. While for the subordination sentences I only had the first one in my essay. These are a bit harder for me but I think that the first one that I had worked really well. I talked about students having a major but also have classes that pertain to the liberal arts ideas which works really well with the setup of the subordination sentences. The second sentence I wrote myself for this assignment but I think it will definitely work in my essay.
